Eviction : I like how you weave concepts from your emotions and use that which is against you and transmute it it adds a real personal feel and i think that what gave u the edge this week i would usually find these type of stories a bit drab (soft) but there was a passionate underlying rage a hint of pain a glimpse into your personality which shined threw and obviously is the artist best friend one of the more emotionally gritty verses this season..it makes me happy as a writer honestly
Dominate:I think this week the underlying irony and humor in your verses
might have got the best of you there's a certain battle mc aura that your pieces have a real veteran appeal and it just commands the readers respect while the story is worthy a short screenplay and
shows that your in a special league of writers i felt evictions piece matched it in more ways then one and that would be the personal character development its a subjective win and i could go tie ..
vote : Eviction
both mc's wrote some wizardry i still consider those W's against me Flukes btw guys but respect great battle
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