[Objective]

Candy: WTF @ that ending, lol. Having a bit of an issue to catch where the story is going and what you're saying during my read through but the closure kind of wraps it up.

Timeless: I guess this is a story of a guy awake at night and where the topic comes into play. However, the switch up in "youth harnessed in slums ofull of what ifs and yes men" seemed a bit abrupt, there seems to be some sort of transition in there but what happened with the guy speeding with cops on his ass?

Vote: Slumber party of girls drinking period blood vs criminals at night and some dude speeding. The execution of both verses were meh to say the least so to me it comes down to the concept and the story being told. Slumber party of girls doing... Ye, not repeating that and "Children of the night"/criminals with some action packed sentences painting a different picture kinda makes both staying on topic.

In the end my vote goes to Timeless. Candy could have taken this if he didn't bring the story in the direction it took at the end, or even just been a bit more coherent overall.