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Old 04-11-2022, 03:43 PM   #7
brokenhal0
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Vote - Master Rock

Master rock this is a different style then im use to seeing from you , the extra effort and change of 'feel' definitely added to the impact the story was fleshed out and on point very smooth stylish writing ..Obj - i feel like if you put in a little bit more effort and added some more meat to the bones you would have won this topical
the skills are there but it's noticeable that you put this one together quick still a solid piece..Masterocks execution and delivery won him my vote
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