Originally Posted by Loast

I'm a pistol popper.. hit shit talkers, run ya mouth and i'll fuck up ya world
u eva see maine squeeze back on a nigga i bare hug his bitch as i'm fuckin his girl
--ok--
BarZ. is back that means bars are back, watch what u say or i'm bruisin ya jaw
n get stick in ya mouth with such precise ur dentist will thank me for doin his job
--wording fucked u here--
Atomics cool but ur new alias should come with a homosexual clause
behind ya name mysteries involved n can only be solved with a hysterical pause
--i think im missing something here dog--
Fag! Mainespitz? nah, he gotta deep throat when he honestly tries
shit, u dick ride n lose so much it would be nuts if this fag didn't swallow his pride
--cool--
I seen ya battle with Metts and to beat me your gonna have to cheat to win
cuz Joe Jackson up so bad i wont be surprised if he bleached his skin
--jackson and jack, son arent pronounced the same... it least for me. ill give the benefit og the doubt tho, but bleached his skin really aint that much of a diss anyway..
my schemes is sick, I drop bombs on rats when these cats see me workin
Atomic bombs wouldn't harm a fly.. let alone spark fear in a japanese person
--this is just too obvious--
how the fuck do u exceed high expectations when your shits harmless and trash
I can make a lower case about everything u write that a educate a kindergarten class
--alright--
Barz,




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Originally Posted by Atomic

this fagg0ts a dyke, backhand 'em & fracture his sight,
hit em w/ a lo blow <-- but that's just him on any saturday night!
--word, wording is still ur biggest problem duke--
didn't believe me? I even said you'd get wrecked bitch,
kid won't LIVE UP to our expectations, lo will be dead in a second!
--dont like it--
u ghostwrite? nothing but wackness is what this herb will lend,
b/c theres no POINT to your TEXT, this isn't fucking words w/ friends.
--this is a good concept but the execution doesnt hit him as hard as it could--
low tier is clearly where this fgt would rank,
so plz keep it 100, even though that's less than u have in ur bank.
--once again, i like the concept... u could make his idea hit way harder imo tho--
i read 1 line in ur verse & thought mannn thats enough, please..
cuz even OckSee's; he's goin down.. it's the only way BarZ will SuckSeed!
--lol, yo thats just kind of corny. made me laff tho--
ur a shy little queer, u got no skill so stop hiding ur fear,
u spittin dope?!
i'd have to take 'em under my wing cuz that's NOT gonna fly around here!
--ive seen the same concept before but u put a different spin on it. I think your problem is you dont make your concepts direct enough. you make a connection but its not hitting ur opponent that hard. like that shit aint gonna fly around here/ under my wing. i mean the connection works fine. but u just gotta hit em in the mouth if u get my drift--
my hands'll wrap around ur fuckin neck & i'll clench hard till u choke,
fucking ironic your NAME is BARS cuz i can't NAME a BAR that you've wrote.
--ok--

gl