[Objective]

Short and sweet like your pieces often are. Definitely enjoyed reading this!

My only critique that I can see would be the opener. Instead of "they can claim", why not "until they claim"? To me that'd follow the rhythmic pattern a bit better + be a bit more poignant and to the point. At least to me this reads better and hits harder with no vague points as to what the tame would do:

To say the least, the tame pray to beasts
Save their speech until they claim a feast

That said tho, enjoyed this a lot, dope write up