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Originally Posted by Eŋg

keep writing.

I really appreciate coming back to this well thought out constructive critique. I've been kind of out of it lately so haven't written anything but have been thinking a lot about my pieces thematically. I've focused on specific emotions or situations, wanting it to be raw/literal but also open for interpretation. I just do it in a not so digestible fashion and won't hit as many unless I tie it to something. I've tried too hard cutting out the last part but I think it has been a dumb move tbh.

I keyed a concept/piece on my phone that I'm going to edit. Would appreciate your input on it when the time comes to post it.

Thanks for the feed/read guys, and yes @big baby. we fite, with forks and spoons at midnight by the broken down church