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Originally Posted by Destroyer
dope mags. modding prowess. but ur text is still shitty tho
u just excel in all the wrong places like in the Dilemma video
ok. kinda light
u show up in so many forms, like some dark souls final bosses
sure. ur record’s nice, but how many of them wins were also like... ur losses?
nah.
i’m nice with the blade. u will fuck around & get urself murdered
come within 6 feet of des u getting poked faster than frontline health workers
smooth.
ur girl stays beggin for real dick. dunno how u managed to throw in a baby
it’s a known fact jamie got stuck with a small wonder like that show in the 80s
too simple
des is tight with moms. keep a room ready in case she’s flown in quick
‘matt reside’ in a home only cause he took that <<< path to ownership
like the matricide wp. wording could have been better but it hits
if nose size correlated to dick size, it would be clear u were made for porn
ur the only cat who can wake up and smell the coffee...that ur mom drank on the day u were born
i want to like this but something is missing. it's not quite harsh enough or funny enough to stand up without some type of flip
got the shotty cocked for u & ready to blast off nine or ten in hatred
when desvon sawa get off the buss..u still end up dead like final destination
you knew this was bad when you wrote it
i’m a text demon. enter in flames & when i leave, ur left bleeding
so if u hear jamie tell you to run, shit! she won’t be talking bout next season
too light
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Quotes: frontline health workers, matricide
Close: Dilemma, smell the coffee
Don't know what happened here, this is a step back from the last couple of weeks. The bars I quoted were fire but didn't have a lot besides that. Most of the misses weren't so much bad as bland.
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Originally Posted by UPN Zuch
You sell phone accessories? Lol, there’s no credit in store
An SD card only has 16 gigs, but every one of them is better than yours
nice wording. cool punch
Your bitch a slut, she takes HIV cocks to the face
If I smash that burner, it’s with a hammer, like I’m trying to keep cops off my trace
this is ok
I had your job at 18, the money ain’t fit for the pros
Your accountant wasn’t mistaken when he described your net income as ‘gross’
ok. kinda simple.
Zuch don’t play, I leave craniums bleeding
Semi splits your dome into sections, find my bullets in stadium seating
idea is ok. don't like your wording
Get a new career, go without the tragedy man
Wife queefed your unborn into a shitter, don’t talk to me about a family plan
need more creativity. everyone has done these lines, this is basically a statement
Even as a miscarriage we couldn’t tell it was yours
How does a ‘wireless expert’ let his own fetus strangle itself with a cord?
wording is weird to me. idea is ok
Your girl large too, sex is tough with where her stomach is
Body structured like a home loan, takes 30 years to get out from under it
ok idea, bad angle.
Des a nobody, a fast death is reason to stare
But his disappearance will take more than 60 minutes
..or Dateline, to get people to care
cool misdirection
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Quotes: 16 gigs, smash burner, 60 minutes
Close: gross, dome into sections, wireless expert, home loan
You only had one real miss to me. I've see you throw harder punches in a verse but this still a pretty consistent drop.
Vote: Zuch Destro's verse feels a little rushed with half his verse missing for me, and Zuch didn't give him much room for error.