I like the vivid descriptiveness in this piece. You built an awesome atmosphere
The setting is cool but we’re no stranger to apocalyptic settings, anyone who has been in a league here has undoubtedly wrote about this same subject a few times but I just like the vision you laid out
“mutated fowls circle the red sky like starved demons
could this really be hell”
“ by the hands of fate, their presence was forged
experiments, evolutionary codex, genetic codes malformed
the primordial cycle, survival, reproduction
laws of nature, extinction, inevitable repercussions”
Good work man
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