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Old 10-10-2020, 08:45 PM   #5
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Spaz had some super general stuff in here, like the wine bottle line. But I did like the opener and I also liked the drum roll bar. Those were standouts deadly sin could have been executed better but a good idea overall a decent inaugural verse welcome to the league

Sinacog what’s to be said? Classic Sinacog. No punches no personals just blasphemous claims. Only this time there’s a twist NONE OF IT RHYMED. Awful as usual but you don’t heed advice so carry on

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