Dave .
Opener was ok but came off a bit unwieldy for me. The wording
Left swipes is ok
Clean n jerked was ass
Lollipop was cool but implying someone is weak to lift up a lollipop kindacornu to me . I like the concept tho . Ok
V neck ok
Yeesys was a banger tho
Conceptually the chinos line was eh but the wording was masterful . Really drove that one . Not great but a good bar
Sweep / resemble a broom . Eww. Ancient
Zuchie
Opener was an interesting observation . I can kinda see it lmso . Effective open
Alpha dog . I don’t even remember enough to care . One of those things where one of your audience members barely remembers your reference . It happens . Someone else will understand it
General Electric was dumb but it works . His shit do look like a hell lol . Ok ..
Right nostril was a no . Just underwhelming
Colt LMAOOOO here we go
Last 4 were .. hmm .
56 k was ok
But closer was a regular degulsr observation n not even a clever one
Hold up
Yeah according to my breakdown 2 quotes each 3 oks for Dave 2 for Zuch ?
I got Dave by the tiniest margin
V/ Dave
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Last edited by El Muffin; 09-25-2020 at 05:56 PM.
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