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Originally Posted by Adverse

Keep writing dude I do enjoy your work just don't know like Eng told me before if this could be classified as "poetry" in a traditional sense

Thanks for the thought out feed, going to try and focus on a more linear approach next. And I agree with you and Eng, I've thought about it and decided that's going to be my style, I want to write poetry or whatever you want to call it like this.

Been posting on a poetry forum as well as HipHop boards, the Patrice Morgan one got great feedback on L.A. and the poetry forum, which is a first for a text in "rap-form". I'm just going to develop it further, listen to feed and build from there. An artist friend of mine has said he can illustrate my poems if I compile enough to make a book out of it. So that's in the horizon as well, I just need to write enough good shit and I'm not sure if this one will make the cut yet.