[Flow]

Originally Posted by Loast

I'm a pistol popper.. hit shit talkers, run ya mouth and i'll fuck up ya world
u eva see maine squeeze back on a nigga i bare hug his bitch as i'm fuckin his girl
psht was alright
BarZ. is back that means bars are back, watch what u say or i'm bruisin ya jaw
n get stick in ya mouth with such precise ur dentist will thank me for doin his job
no
Atomics cool but ur new alias should come with a homosexual clause
behind ya name mysteries involved n can only be solved with a hysterical pause
wasn't feeling it
Fag! Mainespitz? nah, he gotta deep throat when he honestly tries
shit, u dick ride n lose so much it would be nuts if this fag didn't swallow his pride
lmao that was fresh
I seen ya battle with Metts and to beat me your gonna have to cheat to win
cuz Joe Jackson up so bad i wont be surprised if he bleached his skin
meh was alright
my schemes is sick, I drop bombs on rats when these cats see me workin
Atomic bombs wouldn't harm a fly.. let alone spark fear in a japanese person
not sure how this really directs at mainz
how the fuck do u exceed high expectations when your shits harmless and trash
I can make a lower case about everything u write that a educate a kindergarten class
nice fresh again
Barz,


you have a fresh take on battling hopefully you will keep that because theres to many clones walking around here with the same shit, however you do need more direction in your punches and that's what let a few of these bars down.

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=6655
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=6497

Originally Posted by MAINESPITZ

this fagg0ts a dyke, backhand 'em & fracture his sight,
hit em w/ a lo blow <-- but that's just him on any saturday night!
lol pretty easy but I liked it
didn't believe me? I even said you'd get wrecked bitch,
kid won't LIVE UP to our expectations, lo will be dead in a second!
nah didn't even rhyme lol poor effort
u ghostwrite? nothing but wackness is what this herb will lend,
b/c theres no POINT to your TEXT, this isn't fucking words w/ friends.
nah the direction and execution totally lost, wording let it down
low tier is clearly where this fgt would rank,
so plz keep it 100, even though that's less than u have in ur bank.
meh this was alright but pretty simple not much sting
i read 1 line in ur verse & thought mannn thats enough, please..
cuz even OckSee's; he's goin down.. it's the only way BarZ will SuckSeed!
this was alright but the wording again wasn't great set up could of been better
ur a shy little queer, u got no skill so stop hiding ur fear,
u spittin dope?!
i'd have to take 'em under my wing cuz that's NOT gonna fly around here!
meh not for me
my hands'll wrap around ur fuckin neck & i'll clench hard till u choke,
fucking ironic your NAME is BARS cuz i can't NAME a BAR that you've wrote.
lol I liked this

gl

You are improving mainz and I think you have the layout right but your choosing the wrong concepts and/or not making them hit hard enough. You want to hurt him more...

meh this was a difficult one.... I liked Loast and the freshness that he brought but he needs some better execution if he wants those concepts to not get lost on some folk...

Mainz had a number of misses and where he hit was mostly weak stuff however I feel he had more hits overall.

Vote Mainz...

But Loast I see you causing some damage around here.