Those predictions? Just fiction. But I’m glad I read it
Cus if Adverse the Heavy favourite ima Body Weight like Calisthenics
didnt fully get this tbh, unless he has an alias named "Weight/wait" or something similar, which is something you should specify from the jump. The only other alternative is you're saying "I'ma body, wait.." which you should indicate with some kind of punctuation. Either way as a writer, you're responsible for communicating your ideas better to the read. If his name was weight, this would be a good bar, but I can't make that assumption so it's a miss for me
The disses he spit are all misses and shit. Guess ya boy is senile
Cus his Execution’s bout as smooth as how they did Delacroix in Green Mile
ok, seen execution concepts done a lot and this didn't strike me as super original
Knifestyles deployed like they’re a lifestyle choice. He bout to cop a hurtin
When I cut The Idiot with Bowie like im Iggy Pop in Berlin
dope concept, execution could be smoother
Yeah I’m Dave, don’t get it backwards - I ain’t-Cha Pal but it’s likely
That if you’re Banking on winning this when Azealia fate you gon cry cheat
cool
Not a Lot to Offer and your Numbers Up, ain’t that some shit
So I’m thinking furniture auction - WinChester Draws and the Hammer Clicks
concepts cool, executions a little sloppy
If that tough guy act is doctored now you committing malpractice
You couldn’t have seen AdverseCity less if you were repping Atlantis
Nah not really feeling this
Born better off means you were never raw
When heads were ringing alarms with Tenor Saw Ad was feelin’ alarmed bout Tennis Sores
This is ok, I think you're trynna do too much
Attending Wimbledon’s the only time he could get Centre Court, he’s bound to lose
When I sneak up on Ad Vantage Point and Tie em up on my way to Round Deuce
Another one. I'm really not the demographic for tennis bars, but this is ok
BITCH so let’s do this! Why’d you join the tourney kid ain’t Gon prove shit
I’ll take you out here in the first round, then waste another clip on you just for amusement
Nah not feeling this, super antiquated concept and nothing new added in
He always had them BIG dreams, a slick ride with the drop-top
Signed into the NBL and got his wish….kinda...when Coop took his top off!
ok
Evad ain't spraying SHIT...he must have got a kink in the line
On the other hand this mag fuck up your whole profile...like INC did mine
Again, okay. Magazine bars are just incredibly overdone
I ain't shooting to kill, put you in a coma when that pistol blow
Your wife will have to pull the plug on Dave like she canceled Lil Dicky show
ok, could be more creative in the angle
Your chick scheming on your well meaning, you ain’t pokin’ but you treat her right
I’ll find your girl Dave and Buster in the bathroom for a token and a pizza slice
cool idea, executions kinda sloppy. Grammatically this has holes in it on the arcade side of the interpretation
overall, I felt like I've seen better from Adverse, so I was a bit disappointed in this drop. Also the fact that he only did 10 lines vs dave's 16 put him at a disadvantage from the jump. That being said, I think Dave got this. He had some good ideas but I think he tries to do way too much with them when it comes to executing.
overall mvgt Dave
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