Braggodocious and smooth as silk on the flow man. Your multi's were plenty but never forced. Some really cool stand out lines in this:
"You do know at the bottom there's nothin' but only past mistakes
From cats that lack talent,
Dwellin' over trash they've made"
Sad but true.
"All this changin' & shit, Y'all need tailors equipped"
Hard punch. I always get an image when I read pieces like this of a dude in the gym hammering a punching bag. Gearing up for the next bout. This was good, solid sparring piece. Nice work.
Thanks for the rep.
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