Ain't Here...

Johnny 6 feet · 05-19-2020, 08:57 PM

Braggodocious and smooth as silk on the flow man. Your multi's were plenty but never forced. Some really cool stand out lines in this:

"You do know at the bottom there's nothin' but only past mistakes
From cats that lack talent,
Dwellin' over trash they've made"

Sad but true.

"All this changin' & shit, Y'all need tailors equipped"

Hard punch. I always get an image when I read pieces like this of a dude in the gym hammering a punching bag. Gearing up for the next bout. This was good, solid sparring piece. Nice work.

Thanks for the rep.

05-19-2020, 08:57 PM	#2
Johnny 6 feet Storyteller Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 446 Battle Record: 8-4 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League Rep Power: 5558447	Braggodocious and smooth as silk on the flow man. Your multi's were plenty but never forced. Some really cool stand out lines in this: "You do know at the bottom there's nothin' but only past mistakes From cats that lack talent, Dwellin' over trash they've made" Sad but true. "All this changin' & shit, Y'all need tailors equipped" Hard punch. I always get an image when I read pieces like this of a dude in the gym hammering a punching bag. Gearing up for the next bout. This was good, solid sparring piece. Nice work. Thanks for the rep.