Mag was hard to make fresh although the it was a current event flip
Telegraph was nice, tie in were perfect
Thought the gunnar optics was a miss
Champion material was a cool name flip
Informal was cool wp. Personal letter good way to tie it in
Calligraphy was a nice concept. Feels a bit redundant now tho because of 3 letter name plays in a row. Overdoing it man
Burns line LOTB DONNNN DEMARCOOO BANG BANG
The closer was a little convoluted for me bro but I respect the ties and creativity
Vs
Human verification was a nice concept
Sweeper line was fire although you wouldn’t bang on a neighbours roof if it was upstairs? Technicality tho and could have been fixed so I’ll leave it be
Funnel ok wp
The Bball like was nice
Ixnay was a little bit corny for my taste man. The wp itself
Fucked up cash was worded well but didn’t sting or attack him man
Obsolete a bit of a stretch imo
The nasal spray I’ve seen before so didn’t hit
I got Neighbor here but it’s very close imo
Good read fellas some nice stuff
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