Nice. Crazy vocab laced with strong imagery had held my attention from start to finish:
"Be they disguised as apathy or failed repentance’s. Observe: my pedigrees tremendousness.
This is the sort of simpleness your supposed synthesis of the differences I use when I go Limitless."
Over 9000 then? Lol. This just rolled off the tongue; a mix of philosophical musing and straight braggodociousness that balanced out nicely. I liked the superpower-esque sign off as well. It was a good closer to put the rest of the piece in context.
Keep posting. Please rtf.
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