FGR:
You don't come off as scary. Im seeing no tough guy connection
If smash is alarming to me.. he's blowing a rape whistle n pointing in my direction
cool
Your family lives in shambles. Poor... disgusting..covered in bodily fuild
His house is such a hole in the wall, for 30 bucks his bitch will suck you thru it
dope
not a fan of lines that talk about guns or how hard someone is, because its the internet and most of these lines just come across as filler to me
smash:
One uppercut and this dude rocked....visually it'll be a cool shot
So I'll be creative and treat it like facebook and leave f Inna blue box
ok
your flow is unnatural to me, those long lines seemed to drag on a bit too long to keep the flow intact
vote FRG for better flow and more creativity, i didnt see much stand out to me from smash's verse
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