[Candy]

adverse:

pretty dope i liked the story very well structured and the rhyme structure was pretty tight.. it made it all flow pretty smoothly.. i think your style was pretty cool it sorted of played off each character like a tower of jinga and simple back and forth and the description get progessing in the story with it nicely.. all in all pretty cool

bodey:

super dope the whole tale about the cub scoutts was dope.. but your character development was huge some how you outshined adverse and his was deep.. but i think what made this verse was your story telling the way you paced and described the direction of the story was hot.. your rhyme scheme was tight to..

vote = bodey

i think he just took it with a much smoother story.. but it was def very close..