Ender - the wrath was there and the topic touched but i feel like you came off a bit scattered in the approach even tho it builds up...you defind wrath it in indirect ways i dig a good morose flex
the end of the verse could have been a bit more polished almost sounded like horrorcore which i understand why you would do it but the lyrics could have been tighter imo
Bodey - Just great emceeing all around you got your style you got the foundations and you put it together well in this piece like a quick lil glimpse into the mind of wrath your storytelling could have came off a lil more complex verbally but it still built a scene of the said topic some verses lacked that grizzlyness that i fw personally but good shit
v//bodey
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