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Originally Posted by Inno
Seems like you where getting a head of steam as the verse kept going. I dug the imagery in this as well. I usually don’t take a stab at what the subject of your writing is cuz I just dont do it to not offend anyone lol, usually just focus on the writing. AMA take a stab an say this is about allergies? I’m probably wrong but hey let me know lol. This was good but too short like I said before seems like you got going towards the end and just stopped. Good read though
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Maybe I’ll workshop it if that ends up being the consensus I liked how it was going as well but decided to cut it short because it’s hard enough to get people to read a 12 around here lol thanks Inno I like the allergies angle as well, to be completely honest I leave a lot of my writings open ended so the reader can interpret what they want of it, so I’m not one to get upset about you taking a stab at it I think that’s a dope way to interpret it