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Inno · 04-02-2020, 01:30 AM

Seems like you where getting a head of steam as the verse kept going. I dug the imagery in this as well. I usually don’t take a stab at what the subject of your writing is cuz I just dont do it to not offend anyone lol, usually just focus on the writing. AMA take a stab an say this is about allergies? I’m probably wrong but hey let me know lol. This was good but too short like I said before seems like you got going towards the end and just stopped. Good read though

04-02-2020, 01:30 AM	#3
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	Seems like you where getting a head of steam as the verse kept going. I dug the imagery in this as well. I usually don’t take a stab at what the subject of your writing is cuz I just dont do it to not offend anyone lol, usually just focus on the writing. AMA take a stab an say this is about allergies? I’m probably wrong but hey let me know lol. This was good but too short like I said before seems like you got going towards the end and just stopped. Good read though Last edited by Inno; 04-02-2020 at 12:51 PM.