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staring into the soulless eyes - dope.. yeh i was feeling a bit some deep emotions it had a strong writers voice to it the flow was a lil bit loose but the delivery was cool as hell.. all in all pretty dope.
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real cool dude rhyme scheme tight wording dope flow cool.. all in all a real good piece your descriptions were very detailed about simple things you def covered the computer really nicely and the world around it.. i like the slavery element you added to it.. pretty cool thanks..
vote = MMLP
his verse just had more detail in his story and was just a lil more compact.. gl guys thanks dope read
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