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Old 01-26-2020, 01:17 AM   #4
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Your closer was sick, the stone cold line onwards were the best bars of the piece. I think you can connect your lines a little better, like make them more releveant to the bar before it it'll bridge your verse together better. Also do a little check on using the correct word before you post

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That should be puncturing, could've been autocorrect idk. Decent drop man keep writing
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