lol entertaining...and ur wordchoice was dope af
sometimes i feel ur style gets to fragmented, but although some fragmentation, and change of tenses did occur, itself remained themed, and those breaks were of true creative license imo, so it still worked...
but things like 'operatic oganism and conduit cabage...and octopus krav maga, matinee menance, cabranet welches' are fuckin dope word choices/combinaations...adjective noun choices were dope and the highlight of the pc for me...
i did enjoy this, and felt it to be one of ur better drops that i've read...and u deff have ur own style that u clearly owned here..
btw flow was pretty much fluid for me, along with the scheming.
way to stay true to ur name.
dope, vulgar.
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