Your alias run fell to the wayside pussy. boy had voters ALL to blame..
Slinged Mud & Spinned ya Wheels...got stuck in a Rough Patch thinkin that Alt a Reign
dope start, I dig this
This guns an offer...quit PM'in ME tips on how to word shit fuckin proper
Next time you force feed say ah ah I can 'Point at your own Mouth' like a hungry toddler
not really feeling this. Something about the "ah ah" and hungry toddler reference just cheapens the bar
My head's in your wife thighs eatin box as a snack. rockin the snatch..
Caught in the act? Ignorance had her explain it away ON ME'...I'm God of the Gap
I think the concept has a lot of potential, but the wording on this just kinda feels odd
Knock 'em blind. Michelangelo - paint bodies on floors off the side
Fuck the bread...1 punch 'see black & white swirls' then end up spread on the Marble Ry
didnt really connect as a haymaker for me but still pretty solid.
Got dope aim &&& hit a whole range. ima slump this faggot reckless..
Cross the line...leave this boarder in a 'Big Bend Formation' that'd rival Mexico/Texas
i fuck with this one, no complaints
Kid ain't a winner...he just puts on an act. This climax ends in a thriller..
'Finkle is Einhorn'....Inno's Ace cuz he gotta be CRAZY to match up a fake bitch w/ a killer
i had to look up the reference because ive never seen ace ventura, but i dunno - to me it just doesn't really have that sting on it
Last match was 2 vs 1...pussy...I’ll do #’s putting the tech to ya fkn spine
Ry + Inf = what? This equation’ll only be solved once Ex reaches the other side
the X on the other side concept had tons of potential but something about the wording just felt off. I thought this was still pretty solid just based off the strength of the concept though
My aim is feared, I don’t play games w/ queers, bullets weave through ya guts
Think black mirror...dawg all that bitch in ur character is leaving you fucked
I haven't seen the new season of black mirror yet. I looked at the summary of striking vipers and I see what you're going for, but the biggest issue I think is that this is kinda just a regurgitation of a lot of really old concepts e.g. the bitch in you vs a real woman, character in personality versus an actual game or fictional character and being fucked metaphorically versus being fucked literally. I appreciate that this is a new interpretation of those concepts based on a more current reference, but it still involves 3 really played out concepts.
I’m back & it sucks, swag is surreal while ya shitty lines make us giggle at will
Get stretched w/ no chill! These hands r Gunna hit ya frame & leave u drippin for real
solid, I think you could've made it a little stronger with more emphasis on swag/jewelry in the set-up
I’m swinging the steel! This ain’t a game w/e I pick up homie just won’t miss
Legit. Get too close I’ll let the pump burst ya stomach on some dig dug shit
ok. Could've tied a little bit more into this
Listen bro...It’s a fatality if me & ya wife bonin, her kink level is mind blowin
Leavin her wide open! Let’s see Kenshi take brutal beating while blind folded
solid. Would've liked to see at least some kind of mortal kombat reference in the set-up though
My time potent! But I’ve got shanks w/ rusty grooves that’ll be cuttin u all day
Knife work nigga! I get straight to the point, idgaf if it rubs u the wrong way
Eh I've kinda seen this idea flipped in similar ways, and it doesn't really sting as much as it could
overall, I think inf had some higher highs and lower lows whereas ryno was a bit more consistent throughout but didn't have anything that really resonated with me except the algebra bar. I think if ryno closed with a stronger last line, I might be leaning towards him a bit more, but inf probably had 3 out of my favorite 4 bars of the battle
v/ inf
Last edited by Answer; 06-29-2019 at 10:03 AM.
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