Veritas -
Compact drop; fully equipped with nice punchlines; and good rhyming. You have a lot of comedy lines; and they work. I quite enjoyed this written verse for it's quality and merit. It was a enjoyable read. Good work on this verse. A lot of good lines here.
Allen Knight -
Good verse; you're a good punchline writer; and you have a lot of good writing merit. I enjoy your punchline rhyming; and good form in a lot of your rhyming. You're good in ways. Nice work.
Overall -
Good battle here; I have Veritas winning for his quality verse. Nice one.
V/ Veritas
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