making his own dough to pay bills
He loves some Silver
^Probably the best concept I've read from you yet and it works well.
I've read your stuff throughout the years and this is definite progression from the last piece I read from you. Keep writing and focusing on line length/flow and rhymes. Shits getting better for sure.
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I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave,
So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave.
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