Rawn:
Who can doubt the human mouth of Wolfram Alpha
Cloaked in a tunic shroud concealing the proud mood of Bowser
Drinking coolant out the spout of a moving mountain
Looking down, awaiting a cruel calculative ghoulish outcome
Eating scallions over cow tongue; sigma 6 black belt – Malcrum
Reducing towns down to talcum, a plague in days without sun
Move about breaking the rules of sound with loud lungs
Tetra 3 Crowcon, detection methods present and outdone
^This entire segment was powerful. Really dominant stretch, imo. It read incredibly smooth and compelled me to quote it in its entirety before even finishing the piece.
Edgar:
it's the 4 door Carrera chauffered...the terrorist novice
my heatseakers could knock the chill off a pinguin while he weathers the solstice
pen resonantes with atonements, I'm beckoning opponents
with weapons and explosives
set to detonate with a nose flick and a featherweight control switch
^Nice. Very nice. The sheer arrogance that concluded these 2 bars was chilling. Liked it alot.
Overall I felt Rawn took this on consistency. He maintained a great stretch while Edgar started out brilliantly but unfortunately trailed off afterwords.
V-Rawn
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