This was a stylish drop :)..
It didn't get away from itself, as it secured good penmanship with good multi-syllabic rhymes. I enjoyed this love story you portrayed, was quite good. You're on your way to something here. Your style reminds of Twain or something, which is good. I enjoy your writing, as it reminds me of things. You have good imagery, and good rhyme scheme. Nice one here, man. Good work, keep dropping..
Return the feed? lol
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