u got lightweights riding you. If I'm close, you'll be spinning with gale force.
Flash from a bystander &the metal slide down the barrel like a carousel horse
This concept was actually ok, rhyme structure was coo, think you could have worded it around better and replace some words, but overall decent 1-2
---------
Bro Ur Main chick?...
Dropped this goon for bein a duck! We know this weak’ll get rocked
Bieksa top D player for tha King...1 Punch’ll have Ur face on ice & Mine in’a box
This was also a cool concept here imo, I had to read it a couple times as well to get what you was saying, but I got it and it hit for me here!
Overall props to both here, im edging this one to Spree. Only cause your line last week bleak with the carousel horse/carnival ride almost is the same simple concept. Would have won have you not used the carnival ride joint.
V-Spree
__________________
...ThA New ErA...
|