I feel only the people who take the time to really appreciate how exactly he has mimicked the rhyme scheme in that verse will truly appreciate what he did here. It's kinda hard to be listening to dudes scheme in the song and read Pats lyrics simultaneously but with some pausing and reading you can understand that anything apparently absent in Pats flow is missing for this reason.
For this reason, I thought this was a very ambitious concept idea, and that you pulled it off flawlessly. Not only in terms of the scheme but with the message of the verse as well. This was a fresh read Pat, gooooood shit.
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