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Old 06-09-2018, 01:17 PM   #2
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Originally Posted by El Muffin View Post
ummm no ...simmer down grasshopper

that is what we call a misdirection. the setup is click click bang used ONE way

and the punch is the same phrase used entirely different

its still a punch

its not just saying hey my niggas got guns . we strapped coz we dont wanna pay a fine

ITS SIMPLE

if u want to see another example of the bar i used that you are critiquing? look at my closer in the lyric olympics against blue

deep blue sea

deep blue, see

..you are wrong..
YET again
personally I hate that shit because of the comma that's needed to make it work

it's forced to me
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