Sorry, but I seem to remember (a long time ago) reading a 16 from you where you had perfect cadence and the same scheme all 16 lines; so compared to that it's hard for me to think this Part I or Part II is anything great.
Girl wanna stroll out of bounds though
Lucifer lusts she brings heat,
Like it's him on the down low
breakin' apart Earth's crust with his feats
not feelin it bro. like i said i've set your own bar too high.
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