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Geno · 05-21-2018, 06:45 AM

Cool. And cheesy at times. The closer made.me cringe. For one it was waayyyyy toooo.wordy. for.2 its just so cliche.

The rest was good though. I understand ur style now a little better which makes ur work easier to read. Keep it up. Try to avoid the wordy bars. Think it would help tbh

05-21-2018, 06:45 AM	#7
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Cool. And cheesy at times. The closer made.me cringe. For one it was waayyyyy toooo.wordy. for.2 its just so cliche. The rest was good though. I understand ur style now a little better which makes ur work easier to read. Keep it up. Try to avoid the wordy bars. Think it would help tbh __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*