Are you trolling me, bro? Or did my piece just inspire you to write that? If it's the latter then cool. I'm humbled. You had some solid imagery in there. It kind of reminded me of Jadakiss's verse on the song Freddy vs Jason. Mainly, due to the intermixing of the gore and battle rap lyrics.
Just in case you missed it @
Darker Ego
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vrEQ2q7sGIs
Sidenote: I dig you're handle, man. It's pretty dope and esoteric. But, I think it be even doper if you dropped the '
er' off of Dark. Just my opinion.