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Pinot Grij · 03-10-2018, 11:03 AM

Pharmabro is pretty funny.
trump lines are hard to get good reactions cuz it's too easy/obvious.
Rhyming 'battle' is another hard move because it's been done a lot
Closer is dope.

Opener and closer were good. I think you just gotta avoid going down familiar territory. Try some new ideas. Rhyming and construction were on point as well. Good shit.

03-10-2018, 11:03 AM	#8
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Pharmabro is pretty funny. trump lines are hard to get good reactions cuz it's too easy/obvious. Rhyming 'battle' is another hard move because it's been done a lot Closer is dope. Opener and closer were good. I think you just gotta avoid going down familiar territory. Try some new ideas. Rhyming and construction were on point as well. Good shit. __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.