Netcees - View Single Post - Contenders Match: Sour Joog 5-1 Vs Infiltration 5-5

Schadenfreude · 03-02-2018, 03:31 PM

VOTE INFILTRATE

Sourbombz was decent, your wording comes across as forcing it sometimes, mostly because you're focused on concepts, so I get it, just gotta polish up that wording. Inf is just the more experienced writer, he's learned to execute his high concept style too well. Once in a while his wording gets muddled, but the skill shows against lesser writers. Even tho he's a lame for taking the "shon" off his name..lol.

03-02-2018, 03:31 PM	#7
Schadenfreude Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!! Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 1,408 Battle Record: 42-22 Champed - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Tag Team Titles - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 21049084	VOTE INFILTRATE Sourbombz was decent, your wording comes across as forcing it sometimes, mostly because you're focused on concepts, so I get it, just gotta polish up that wording. Inf is just the more experienced writer, he's learned to execute his high concept style too well. Once in a while his wording gets muddled, but the skill shows against lesser writers. Even tho he's a lame for taking the "shon" off his name..lol. __________________ Aali hupatikana kwa ghali.