WRATH -- verse is aight. a little broken wording here and there. the aggression is solid but wording draws back a bit. Some of the wp was decent: electrician, lip bars were cool. Nothing that grabbed me and said this was lotb, opponent really needs to come hard.
Ender -- good aggression. some basic wp that for me hit a bit harder than Wrath. liked the silent line, bottom of the barrel had funny execution. Flavourless roast was lmao. I don't know what that flaw shit means, or the closer.
Look, let's get honest -- these aren't championship-quality verses. So I'm voting on personal preference. I thought Ender had a few more comedic takes that made his verse a better read. I'm voting for Ender.
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