[Mr. J]

Asylum, nice to see you back, I thought your verse was pretty smooth
havent lost your touch but your choice in topic has left me confused.
i dont know what you are going for and thats what scares me at the end of the day.
maybe because I can see what you are trying to do but it didnt pan out so well.
perhaps if you extended on your piece I would have a better grasp on it.
about lines 4 through 8 I start to enjoy it because of how you toy with the flow.
but then some of it seems to turn into a misguided concept that should be chopped
either way I felt this was pretty well done to come off of during a hiatus..

Diablo, Every week it seems you come up with a fresh new concept to bring to the table.
its not often you see someone do that, after last weeks battle I hoped youd bring some heat.
this was a cool drop, the flow is always concise when you drop as well.
I am not one for dialogue but you have a pretty good grasp on what you are trying to convey.
I think the interesting part is where you touch on some wording that people rarely think of.
which adds to your ability of dropping so rapidly, I really enjoyed the rasped/zapped idea.
dope verse.

v/Im going to have to give this one to Diablo.
the bulk of his verse surpassed what asylum pulled off in his
I enjoyed both verses though