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Originally Posted by Incredible

Tool time with that beard...looks like we should be seeing a birds beak, your weird n we forget the words you speak
He progressively gettin mad now like its Flo's week, sharing traits with ya bitch cause outside your black but downstairs your both pink

What? Your syllable schemes are off, simple and just garbage. I'm need you to work on that along with developing an actual punch. You could have said this will a 3rd of the syllables/extra shit bro. Chop your bar structure in half dude.

I'll bust 4 to C head, then press fast forward to see if he dead, hit rewind just so I can blast him w/ the C4 instead
Your plots always end w/ no cred, he'll see this and cut like bread n what he's got written will start to immediately poor red!!

Trying to make sense of this and having a hard time. Again, too much extra shit and not enough of the right shit to form a decent punch.

No one has ever believed what you said!
Pull out all the tricks first week? ill wait until 6, no need for concealing this shit, for this guy? itll be no problem
Cuz you slow in the head, like a bitch that gives no noggin, throwing that syrup back, won't stop you from a coughin (coffin)

Lol Coughing/Coffin play in 2017. The execution was terrible. From A COUGHING... FROM A COUGHING? Doesn't make the slightest bit of sense...
Needed more thought and wit and less extra bullshit to pull off a played WORDPLAY like this one.

I'm obviously not a good match for you, n sorry I'm taken, he the fat dude that stops the waitress... "um, I asked for regular...this is Canadian bacon"
If you did a live feed while reading this, he'd be visibly shaken, your threads are constantly flaken, are we sure he ain't Jamaican?*

Ok... Same as above - however not seeing how shaking and being Jamaican correlate at all? Do Jamaicans shake or something that I am not aware of?

I mean they just never come true, so what's up? What you gon do? Chyeah so big, inc gotta be at the top of this seesaw battle
I'll wait till he gets going and then cut the head off this BULLshit and leave nothing but C YEE-AH n sattle

Not sure what you are trying to deliver here. Pretty horrible.

OVERALL; You need to visit the archives man and become acclimated with how verses are constructed here on NC. I mean, you can continue to write however you please or which ever way you feel comfortable - just work on delivering witty concepts with nicely executed punches. You failed to throw any type of punches in this verses. Nothing stood out. Everything was over worded half thought out/weak/terrible concepts that were poorly executed.

Originally Posted by Chyeahhh!!!

you aint dope enough to come around here and flex nigga
yea this Return of the legends,
meaning you're not even allowed to touch keys... or press Enter
Wack.
I MC searched you and got the gas face from the results on the 1st page
absolutely nothin...cuz you stay at home and never score,let alone get to 3rd base
Out dated concept still better then anything he put down tho.
I got big guns,the sound alone leaves niggas deaf bro
while your guns got a smaller bust than Misses Destro's
Really light.
I'll tell yah bitch "Follow meeee" in my Pac voice, she'll run in my DM's, see..
and for the record, I gave her more advances than Russell Simmons, check the TMZ
Didn't like this one.
who R U, that's rhetorical, I'm the Oracle..the One all in yah chic's cookie, dog
and you get Mase'd by when you look at broads, that's word to the book of God
Meh... wack again...

OVERALL; Not your best work, actually probably one of the worst verses seen from you but at the same time you dropped just enough for the win here considering what your opponent dropped.

v/CHYEA - Better structure, better punch attempts.