the first 8 or 9 lines (a speck of the overall verse) stymied a few attempts in reading this. even having done so a handful of times, they don't quite come together for me - but it matters naught.
everything else was stellar.
let’s all huddle around the baggage carousel until we depart
what bothers me is the converging of a million souls living apart
that's something i'd say, but i wouldn't quite as adroitly.
thanks for the read.
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