I'ma give my honest opinion. No hate intended.
I'm with the group of people who cannot understand it. I have bouts where i think i might then thats quickly erased by its unorthodox nature.
Some of the rhymes are on point and some are not(or at least from my perception).
Your either of high intelligence or want to give off that vibe.
Either we're stupid or your a genius. Because i consider myself pretty intelligent and cannot follow this.
It's everywhere. Like scattered thoughts.
I would like to see you do a piece oriented around a clear topic and perfect rhymes with slants here and there. Something that showcases flow and intellect without going over the readers head. Then i may be able to provide better feed.
As of now i can only say you very unorthodox.
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