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Originally Posted by Natural
This isn't very good. I don'tt know if your diss toc"A True Emcee" was suppose to be so subtle or not but it definitely wasn't very impactful. It was a push if anything. You need punches if your gonna try and diss someone or their piece.
The rhymes were random and kinda just thrown out there.
My advice to you is to try and use perfect rhymes for a little while and see how it works for you.
Your slant rhymes are just out there.
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I wasn't trying to really diss true mc just push like you said.
and i'm working on my slant rhymes and assonants.