Vote Coup....
Jess - I/ve used peoples names in stories before, but this was just... iono... a whole lot of shit to diss coup... It was funny in parts but the story wasnt very engaging... just a list of things to do to someone..
Coup wrote a politically deeply poetic piece... that was deep... and had better flow and imagery...
Ipreferred coups piece also because it was complete... even though it was shorter... Jess... instead of a list... i think you shoulda told was what actually happened to coup... instead of telling us the things that could or should happen to coup
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