MVGT Jesodist
Jesodist - Total domination from an approach standpoint: You bodied the topic more thoroughly. Was not enthralled by Timeless's lackluster flurry opening rhyme scheme... rushing amateurishly into battle... Jesodist, wonderful wordplay. You peaked my interest much more, especially, after concentrating on the topic at hand while differentiating these two pieces... Jesodists presentation, in terms of the aesthetics, capitalization, as well as the angle, mechanics, and overall enjoyability were all superior this week.
Quote:
Jesodist
Let others Harness a Light from the Candle since their Life is in a Tangle,
Everyone knows the story about who Created Men,
Let knowledge be an alter with enough Space for Them,
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Time will tell if Timeless can rebound from this. Will talk indepth about the battle in the week 2 mag.