Des-
1) this read smooth. Didn't rly care for it's concept tho.
2) this was a nah. In limbo w.the old jokes unless flipped dope.
3) I did a 'heh' in my head at coke zero.
4) ah jokes. One of your strengths.
5) Didn't work. Came off corny
6) no.
1) nasty wording yeesh. But, wtf is a skunk?
2) this had a lot of potential wording wise. I still liked it a lot tho.
3) meh.
4) cool personal.
5) this could've been soo dope. Syl took away from it. Still ok tho.
6) green to this. But it's self explanatory. Meh.bar.
I felt ill-nika verse more. Des came off as a key. Ill came off more polished
V- illnika
Last edited by Suthaveli; 11-18-2016 at 09:46 AM.
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