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Old 05-19-2013, 11:45 PM   #13
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Originally Posted by KennyCerealBowl View Post
Creative and innovative rhyme scheme can be tricky huh witt?
Here i'll break it to you
A(internal)BBBBCBBB(internal)DDFF.
And Alot more of internals, slant rhymes and couplets to create the rhyme scheme.

Psh It doesn't rhyme nigga learn your fundamentals.
Also managing to fit 8 syllables in one line without sounding
Overbearing.
Aint up to this level.
lmfao


cats break doors with in Sturbridge Village with cartilage that snap in four places

Rhyme scheme ABBABAB(internal)BBBBBBB(external)CABABABBBABABBB

fucking retard

why don't you just write this flatulence in a notebook, write rave reviews in the margins, and hide that shit under your bed?

anyone that don't think your nice is auto whack

Cool story brah
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