Ydk... solid flip with the wording of the time/record...well written fa real..
2trip...ginna try an give u some feedback that will help... rhyme scheme ia good finally from you... really ur missing wordplay/creativity. Something needs to go with the word accomplice..a connection either in the set up or the actual insult... best i seen from you so far tho...u gettin it
Vote...YdK
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