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Old 05-18-2013, 12:24 AM   #8
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mic.

smooth shit like always..felt like your backstory was on point herer what i mean is your had some cool ddepth to your words. great progression moved along smooth like a said but it also managed to keep me interested..good shit man.

zen. i refuse to type that other name.

this was dope shit bro..i gotta say your scene setting was out fucknig standing..though aesthetic i thought the HAs where placed nicely because i actually read those first in a quick movement of my eyes like a cheetah and i felt like the laughs where coming from every where...yeah lol. to the verse, your story was onpoint as well i mean aside from the great imagery you wrote a very alive piece..waht i mean is you brought the picture to life you gave it character great flow as well thouht it was just as smooth as mics piece....dope shit.


i got zen on this one thought his piece had a bit more meat... mic had a dope piece but i fet like zen had just a bit more to offer when compared.good battle fellas.

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